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On the Edge – dVerse Open Link Week 114
Here’s my latest entry into the dVerse Open Link – why not take a look at everyone else’s responses?
This piece is in honour of everyone who is striving for balance in their creative and ‘other’ lives. This year for me has been… horrible, and so my creativity has helped me manage all the incessant thoughts racing around in my head. Next year, let it be better…
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– On the Edge –
I watched you breathe your last
In that hospital room
With its hospital smells
And the pneumatic mattress
Which continued to sigh
Long after you –
went
I know that nurses continued to laugh
In the long hallway
With the squeaking floor
But silence settled
In those empty moments
Right after you –
left
I write about you, over and over
In this year of my life
With my heart, broken wide
Creativity rescue me
Help me live,
Now that you are –
gone.
Warning Unheeded – dVerse Poetics
I’m getting into this dVerse thing, big time! Thank you to everyone there for the warm welcome 🙂
So, here’s my submission to the dVerse Poetics prompt – this week, we are asked to write something inspired by a time-worn phrase or saying, whether it is something from the TV, the radio, a song, an old catchphrase that we or friends, family or colleagues use – inspiration can be found anywhere.
This week, the phrase ‘be careful what you wish for’ has been floating around in my head. I could probably explain why, but perhaps that’s not relevant.
Anyway, I hope you enjoy my piece below – please do visit the linky link thing to read many more!
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– Warning Unheeded –
‘Be careful, be careful’
the old woman said,
my youth it knew better
and I shook my head.
‘You’re old and you’re feeble’
I stated with scorn,
and tossed barbed-wire glances –
her face fell, forlorn.
I wanted the top job,
accolades in all spheres,
‘All hail the big chief’
to ring in my ears.
I did achieve fame,
yes, fortune was mine,
but something was missing
no love to entwine
in the twists and the turns
of my life, well-endowed
no face to light up
for my own, in a crowd.
Be careful, be careful
I’m an old woman now,
in my youth I was wrong –
it’s too late for me now.


