What does your day sound like?
The groan that escapes through a mildly bitten lip as you haul your carcass out of bed.
The muted shuffle of slippers on laminate floor and the rasp of terry towelling against skin as you multi-task your way to the bathroom.
The squeak of naked foot against the bath as you slip into the shower – quite literally.
A sigh this time as the soft, warm water- needles pummel your skin,
and the voice of your thoughts, your thoughts, your need to stay just there, just there forever
(or at least for as long as the hot water lasts).
But it’s a work-day, or a shopping-day, or a car-washing-day, or a take-the-kids-to-the movies day
and you have to desert your naked haven and get-damn-dressed.
One day, you promise yourself,
your day will sound like ripe cherries squeaking against your teeth as you bite into their shiny skin and the juice runs down your chin.
One day, your day will sound like your daughter’s gleeful chuckle when she found the Easter eggs hiding in the crook of the branches of the old plum tree.
One day, you promise yourself, your day will taste of freedom.
On my way home, I was listening to an interview on the Radio 4 Woman’s Hour podcast, with Felicity Ford who is a sonic artist (and knitter). She was talking about a project she engaged on to encapsulate the knitting history of the women of the Shetland Islands. This made me think about what a day would sound like (and then I I slipped into taste).
Can anyone identify with my poem?
10 thoughts on “The sound of your day”
Oh Freya you took me back to working days in the middle of winter on days like today when it is cold, the wind is blowing off Antarctica and you so want to stay in bed. You lie there thinking of the ritual you have to go through to get organised to get out the door. The hot shower is wonderful as it does warm you to face the cold and yes you do find yourself staying as long as you can.I have to admit that now days I do enjoy the taste of freedom….and it’s GOOD!!!!
I’m so glad that you enjoyed this Michael, and that you could reminisce from the viewpoint you look from now!
Glad I could too.
Reblogged this on HermitCrab and commented:
Read this wonderful piece to See · Smell · Hear · Taste your day get up and march off the page, leaving you to catch up.
Mmmm cherries….God, I love your writing style! Impeccably sensory.
Thank you so much!
Thank you for this, HermitCrab
My pleasure. Always happy to share great things!
my days usually sound very nice 🙂
That’s good to know 🙂