I have nothing left and so I am consumed incendiary for the mother whose fire is extinguished for the father who is mere ashes for the child
for the child
I protest I have nothing left you will burn with me and you will listen
Tonight the dVerse Poets Pub is kindly hosted by Punam for Quadrille Monday, where she invites us to write a quadrille of 44 words on the them of ‘protest’.
He sows fine seeds upon the earth But no wheat grows, there is a dearth Of rainfall
The sun beats down upon his field The soil bakes hard, there is no yield Still rainless
He hopes for wind and begs for clouds He whispers soft, he prays aloud for raindrops
He lies prostrate, drowning in fears A ghostly form cries saltless tears The rainsprite
Showers and sunlight join as one The heavens shimmer, having fun A rainbow
It’s Meeting the Bar time over at dVerse Poets Pub, and Laura, our congenial host, has asked us to create a Compound Word Verse of five stanzas, three lines in each, with the syllable format 8/8/3 and rhyming pattern a/a/b. The final line must end with the required compound word that begins, or ends, with the stem word.
Limitation can often create freedom as our poetic and creative minds no longer need to expand into the freedom of the form, but in the story itself. I had no idea I was going to write a poem about a farmer desperate for rain – although given the drought and constant high temperatures we have had in Europe, this probably isn’t surprising.
If you fancy trying your hand at this Compound Word Verse form, why not join us? It’s fun, creative and you can read lots of other contributors’ poems into the bargain!
Once in a lifetime I hover at the threshold, made ice with fear, thawed by hope yet brittle with acceptance for this is no rehearsal; no amount of practising the u n f u r l i n g of your life can prepare me for your journey
and this will not be the last time, for you are the first the most important, paving the way and perhaps, because of that I fancy this gives you solace together with the drama that your departure creates; a fanfare marking your final parade
you are not keen on acceptances nor being the quiet man preferring to make waves, no, bloody storms! your greatest fear is being left behind, so you leave first slamming the door shut to make your point
hope is a barbed crown of roses scratching your scalp red-raw, blood and perylene petals not merging, but fighting like the tigers in your soul; I never know which one will win fearing one, hoping for the other understanding finally, that I have no say
as for the ice? you prefer it - - floating - - in your martini (dirty) two olives, pierced
and even still you raise your glass chin chin and I ciao ciao you, always present, never past tense au revoir, Dad this is not goodbye.
Over at dVerse Poets Pub, it’s time to dive into a bit of Poetics with our friendly host, Kim. This week she has asked us to be inspired by the glorious poem ‘The Window’ by Mary Jean Chan, which you can read here. Her poem won second prize in the 2017 National Poetry Competition.
Kim has asked us re-read and explore Chan’s poem, particularly the use of line breaks and caesura to build rhythm and evoke emotion, and the three-word movement: “anger is like the sun, which is like love” and then write a poem that begins with ‘Once in a lifetime’, just like Mary Jean Chan’s.
Writing this was certainly enjoyable but quite a challenge to begin with, and then I got into a rhythm, losing myself in the process. Even though it’s thirteen years since my dad died, he’s still inspiring me. His death certainly wasn’t goodbye!
If you’d like to join us, head over to dVerse, follow the guidelines and most of all, have fun!