It’s time for my latest offering to Lillie McFerrin’s Five Sentence Fiction, a weekly prompt where there is no word limit, just a limit on the number of sentences. Plus, although she provides a word prompt, it is just for direction only – you don’t have to include the word itself in your contribution.
This week, the prompt is – MAGNETIC.
Do let me know what you think of my offering below – and whilst you’re at it, why not take a look at everyone else’s offerings (I’m sure they’ll be fabulous), and even give it a go yourself…
– The Boy –
The boy stared, the tingling that had started in his fingertips crawling up his arms like an army of ants; they had all told him not to open the door.
It wasn’t anything special, just plain wood that could do with a lick of paint – in its prime it must have been scarlet, now it was dulled with age and several flakes lay on the floor, crispy like autumn leaves; they crunched under his shoes.
He sidled closer, reaching out to touch the handle, pulling his fingers back sharply as they made contact with the cold metal.
The boy muttered to himself “Do it!”
Closer, yet closer, hand hovering over the handle; still he couldn’t steel himself to grasp, and push…
6 thoughts on “The Boy – Five Sentence Fiction”
This is beautifully written!
Thank you so much, Grace!
All intertwined in your five sentences creating a vivid picture
Perhaps the door would need to be pulled instead of being pushed.
Now that’s a good alternative – I’m not sure that the boy thought of pulling! I’m glad you enjoyed it Robin – thank you for visiting and commenting 🙂
How lovely…hesitancy, reluctance and fear all brought to the surface.
I like how it’s possible to show so much in a few words. I’m glad you enjoyed it.