It’s time for my latest offering to Lillie McFerrin’s Five Sentence Fiction, a weekly prompt where there is no word limit, just a limit on the number of sentences. Plus, although she provides a word prompt, it is just for direction only – you don’t have to include the word itself in your contribution.
Do let me know what you think of my offering below – and whilst you’re at it, why not take a look at everyone else’s offerings (I’m sure they’ll be fabulous), and even give it a go yourself…
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– Assumption –
“Why the hell did you do that?!”
“Because I can’t believe that you spent all that money on yourself, when you knew I needed a new car, when you knew how much I’ve been trying to save up so that once, just once, I could have something that wasn’t second hand!”
11 thoughts on “Assumption – Five Sentence Fiction”
Oh my–I’m afraid that relationship’s a little too volatile for my liking! I tended to be attracted to chaos when I was younger. Now it just makes me tired.
Oh my–I’m afraid that relationship’s a little too volatile for my liking! I tended to be attracted to chaos when I was younger. Now it just makes me tired.
Oh yes, me too. There’s passion and there’s exhaustion, don’t you think?!
Yes, I echo morellalamuerte’s thoughts on the matter…this is a relationship that is doomed to make two people very unhappy. Nice five!
Thank you, Britton. I couldn’t be in a relationship like that…
I like anticipating endings but I didn’t anticipate this one 🙂 passion to anger in 5 seconds
Good – I do like to surprise, every now and again! 🙂
The reader definitely feels the emotions behind this…well done!
Thank you. I wouldn’t want this kind of relationship, to be honest….
Me either.
Sigh, not the ideal outcome, was it? How much we say in anger and repent at leisure. Lovely delineation of thought ❤
Indeed, we don’t always take enough time to think first…. Thank you!