Down the rabbit hole – dVerse Form for All

Here’s my latest entry into the dVerse Form for All!

Today, we are attempting the ode in the style of Pablo Neruda, the Nobel prize-winning Chilean poet who developed his own style of ode, dedicated to the mundane, the ordinary, the everyday.

My mundanity is something most of us have to contend with, and yet I think we kind of love it, even if it doesn’t make us happy all of the time…

I hope you enjoy my offering…


– Down the rabbit hole –

You drive me
to achieve what
I would fail
to do
myself –
in the morning
you hustle and
chivvy me
along to
the rhythm of
my beating
heart –
‘Don’t be late,
don’t be late’
you cry
as if you
were Alice’s
white rabbit
brought to life –
every mechanical,
clinking, clanking
to save my from myself,
from the terror
of missed trains
and the ire
of irate colleagues –
and yet my love
for your
turns sour in an
when I forget
to silence you
at weekends.
O alarm clock –
are you my master
are your hands
in mine,
when all is said –
and done?

34 thoughts on “Down the rabbit hole – dVerse Form for All

  1. oy…the alarm clock…and clocks in general…a love hat relationship… i’m using the alarm clock in my iphone…. you can program a certain time for mon – fri (which is 5 in my case…oy..) and then one for sat – sun – so i at least don’t wake at 5 on the weekend cause i forget to put it off…smiles

  2. I cannot sleep with a mechanical alarm clock anywhere near me. That’s why I use my phone and thus avoid the weekend trauma. I enjoyed your poem and the question at the end works well.

  3. How amusing. You had me fooled into thinking it was a human being pushing you along in the mornings ๐Ÿ™‚
    An ode with a twist. Well, they say hate is adjacent to love .

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